"Brilliant Chapter one that was worth the wait!!! I was reading it outloud like it was an actual episode and it ran so well

one paragraph well two stood out really well
"Sam looked from Fornell to Gibbs and back again. “When I came to NCIS, I did not trust authority; I could not work with a team. I’d been stabbed in the back by colleagues once too often. Gibbs, Tony, Tim, Ziva…they taught me what a true team should be. They taught me how to function within a team. Maybe that’s why I can recognize where your director, and you, are going wrong. An individual will never succeed the way a team will.”

“There’s no I in team,” Gibbs said softly.

“Exactly. And you taught me that. You taught me to take responsibility for my ideas and my actions. You encouraged me to become the best I could be within a team framework.”"

These were brillient i loved having Sam tell exactly how she felt and gibbs agreeing with her"