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Abby got up from her bed hearing a noise from the kitchen, but then her cat came in, "come here zextin come here, oh good boy,stay here zextin mommy will be right back." :D right then abby left to the bathroom to brush her teeth to get ready for a new day at the office! abby loved going to work it was her most favorite thing to go to every morning, so when she got back to her bedroom, she saw a man sitting on her bed, "huhhhhhhhhhh oh my God who are you and get out of my house now!!! ummmm no!!! I'm gonna call the police!!!ohhh OK," just then Abby ran into the bathroom where her cell-phone is, she called Gibb's, "hello", "Gibbs you need to help me", then the man started to break down the door, "uhh Gibbs help please," "OK OK abby whats wrong?" "there's a man trying to knock down the door. I'm in the bathroom," "do you know how he got in without u seeing" "well i woke up cause i heard a noise in the kitchen then i went to the bathroom to brush my teeth then i came back and there was a man on my bed," "abby stay still and stay on the phone ill be there in a minute, "OK Gibbs just hurry," the man brooke down the door, "uhhhhhhh Gibb's help help help," her voice trailing of , "let me go let me goooo," now he put her in his car, and punched her and she knocked out just then tons of cop cars came trailing down the street just then they stopped the guy he got out and then gibbs went to the side of the car and opened it abby almost fell out but gibbs caught her then he took her to the ambulences abby woke up just in time to hear what he had to say, "abby i will kill you one day but you better know you will die in the matter of weeks, and you better be scareed.," "gibbs what happened oh abby you are all right now your safe! ....................to be continued............


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JMK758 A little difficult to read 0 Nov 14 2011, 7:57 PM EST by JMK758
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Some systems bunch everything into one paragraph, but hitting 'Enter' twice sometimes gets around that technical problem.
Of course, spell check is essential. If you have problems with spelling a story on-line, try writing it on a program like 'Word' and then copy/paste.
When dealing with exclamation points, remember, less is more. Confine yourself to one point per paragraph, and use the structure of the sentence to do the work by building suspense.
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